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Aha! Moment – MIT Application Essay #4

What attribute of your personality are you most proud of, and how has it
impacted your life so far? This could be your creativity, effective
leadership, sense of humor, integrity, or anything else you’d like to
tell us about. (200-250 words)

I am the hammer which secures the loose nails of life. Reliably I strike, whether to contain a testosterone infused ram or smite a trojan virus. With adversity, I can feel myself come alive, skin crackling like electricity. When the greenhouse plastic rips, I hold fast and, in true Vermont tradition, guide the blow that leaves it patched with duck tape. At every moment of sudden adversity, I strike hard, with loud ringing in my ears.

Aha! Moment – MIT Application Essay #3

Describe the world you come from; for example, your family, clubs,
school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams
and aspirations? (200-250 words)

Last winter I slit a old ewe’s throat. Her blood gushed into the deep snow downhill of our little slaughter operation. The air was blisteringly cold, and the only source of warmth was the body cavity of the sheep lying before us. My hands were stiff and covered in the sticky juices of the corpse. That moment defines the ethos of my home. Life is about solutions and the hard labor necessary to achieve them. Whether we need to build a rabbit grazing ark, plant the garden for optimum efficiency, or slaughter the chickens for winter meat, one can expect everyone to roll up their sleeves and dive into the solution.

Aha! Moment – MIT Application Essay #2

Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which
department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (100 words or
fewer)

The world around me was brought into sharp relief the first time I stepped into a chemistry classroom. The particulate perspective of nature gave me my first semblance of understanding. At that moment I knew hard science was in my future. Less than a year later I encountered physics through Star Trek. I felt a kinship between myself and the pointy-eared Vulcans which transcended the television screen. Physics is where the future lies.

Aha! Moment – MIT Application Essay #1

We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are
required of you. Tell us about something you do for the pleasure of it. (100 words or fewer)



An intimate cup of tea is the most pleasurable thing in the world. There are no more than a few mouthfuls of liquid in my teacup, but those mouthfuls can be traced back to the first chemical principles used by mankind. Freshly boiled water swirls the fine black tea leaves in the leeching process and as the leaves unfurl in the liquid they impart their subtle flavors upon it. The process is ceremonial in nature. The tea is strained. Sugar and cream are added; the fat globules absorb and enhance the flavor. Finally content, I cup the soothing drink between my hands.   

Aha! Moment – College Application Essay #1 (with essay topic)

Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you.

What do you want to be when you grow up? For most six-year-old children, this is a simple question, but for me it was the only one I could never be sure of. How was I to know my life’s purpose without first knowing the purpose of life? I thought there must be some underlying objective for mankind. Perhaps it was the survival of the species, or something deeper, like a complete understanding of the universe. Despite my general dislike of blood and needles, I felt that it was my duty to become a doctor in an effort to help my fellow man. Since then I have realized that I can do something I love while still working toward the betterment of mankind. I cannot aspire to understand existence, but I can work the improvement of that existence.

Aha! Moment – College Application Essay #1

What do you want to be when you grow up? For most six-year-old children, this is a simple question, but for me it was the only one I could never be sure of. How was I to know my life’s purpose without first knowing the purpose of life? I thought there must be some underlying objective for mankind. Perhaps it was the survival of the species, or something deeper, like a complete understanding of the universe. Despite my general dislike of blood and needles, I felt that it was my duty to become a doctor in an effort to help my fellow man. Since then I have realized that I can do something I love while still working toward the betterment of mankind. I cannot aspire to understand existence, but I can work the improvement of that existence.